Tuesday, December 28, 2010

The Lake

My head was pounding from the ripples in the water. The water was loud even though the wind was weak. My fingers were numb and shaky. I smiled at the bird that perched himself on the rock beside me.

I did good. My dad would be proud I thought. I was a good son.

Out of the corner of my eye I saw my knee bouncing uncontrollably as a nervous anxious person would do. “Stop it,” I told myself out loud.

My right ear started ringing and my left eye twitched. I hit myself on the forehead and yelled, “Stop! Stop it now.”

The bird flew away.

I looked down at my fingers. My fingernails were dirty with blood. I picked up a twig from the ground and started cleaning them. I became calm. No more twitching. No more ringing. The dirt from the twig started to replace the blood from underneath my nails.


I looked out at the river in front of me. The sun was starting to come up. It was time for me to leave the burial site. I did my job well. After all, he killed my brother and retribution is my glory. My dad will be proud.

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